There was too much going on; too many plot points; too many different POVs; and it was too repetitive. How many times did Kirsten need to think that she was on the wrong side of 40 and not attractive enough? And how many times did Melissa need to think she was on the wrong side of 50 and not attractive enough? It was more about hooking up at the office Christmas party than actually about Christmas. After reading two of this author's books and being disappointed in them both, I don't think I'll be trying anything else by her.